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Friday 19 May 2017

Puddle

It had been raining for 2 days. There  was a puddle it was outside the classroom


Ms King said “Who wants to go into the puddle?”  everyone shouted “Yes” Then I got changed and I ran down into the puddle. I slid into the puddle. Then me and Brendon slid  then Brendon pretended  to be a girl.


Miss King counted down to let us know to  go Inside. Then all of us ran back to class where we dried ourselves

I felt so good even though the grass hurt.

1 comment:

  1. Osa!!!!
    Great writing. I can imagine you swimming in that puddle.
    How deep was it?
    Was it deep enough to do BOMB?
    Take care Mr Talanoa :)

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