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Thursday 23 August 2018

Peer Editing - Peephole Narrative writing



Once there were to detectives there name were Steve and Jonathan and Dave is the robber. The two detectives ran to the robbers house and knocked on the door and while the robber was putting the money away. Steve and Jonathan held up a picture of his nice friend. Than the robber went to the door and saw the picture through the peephole. He thought that was his best friend then he put his gun in his pocket then he opened the door
then he got busted. When he got busted he was ashamed of himself.

this is what i done with my partner Nina

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