Narrative Writing

A long time ago in an old village there lived some villagers. There was a deadly creature who was a Saber Tooth tiger. It was searching for some people to eat. The saber tooth tiger found two people. It was so deadly that it ate the two people. Then it was running away from three.Then the three people killed the saber tooth tiger. The villagers never saw any deadly creatures ever again.

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The mother sheep followed me along the path
Picking up her pace she realised i was within touching distance of with her lamb.she let out a loud low bleat which echoed around the paddock. The sleeping lifted it head and turned towards us before slowly returning to it sleep. As the sheep
got closer closer i thought about whether should
Turn and run i began to panic was she going to attack me? Holding my breath i froze i sigh as the sheep as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards it’s lamb. Phew that was a close call.

Peer Editing - Peephole Narrative writing

Once there were to detectives there name were Steve and Jonathan and Dave is the robber. The two detectives ran to the robbers house and knocked on the door and while the robber was putting the money away. Steve and Jonathan held up a picture of his nice friend. Than the robber went to the door and saw the picture through the peephole. He thought that was his best friend then he put his gun in his pocket then he opened the door
then he got busted. When he got busted he was ashamed of himself.

this is what i done with my partner Nina

Narrative Writing

Steve and Jonathan are detectives and Dave is the robber. The two detectives ran to the robbers house and knocked on the door and while the robber was putting the money away. Steve and Jonathan held up a picture of his nice friend than the robber went to the door and saw the picture through the peephole. He thought that was his best friend then he put his gun in his pocket then he opened the door then he got busted. When he got busted he was a shame on himself the END.

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