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Friday 31 August 2018

Dimc 2


this is what we done

Dimc 2

This week in maths I worked with Mia, Antzel and Tori to solve this question:


This is our working. We had to draw a probability tree to find how many combinations we could make. I think the trees look like chicken feet. This helps me to remember what strategy to use. I was proud of myself as I sat with my group and I shared my ideas. Next week I want to get better at sharing my thinking.

Thursday 30 August 2018

osa sheep pov


Who is that hideous person?! She is going to steal my son! I’m going to protect my son Im going to baa to make her go away.

osa writing



The mother sheep followed me along the path
Picking up her pace she realised i was within touching distance of with her lamb.she let out a loud low bleat which echoed around the paddock. The sleeping lifted it head and turned towards us before slowly returning to it sleep. As the sheep
got closer closer i thought about whether should
Turn and run i began to panic was she going to attack me? Holding my breath i froze i sigh as the sheep as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards it’s lamb. Phew that was a close call.

Thursday 23 August 2018

Dimc 2

this is what we done

Peer Editing - Peephole Narrative writing



Once there were to detectives there name were Steve and Jonathan and Dave is the robber. The two detectives ran to the robbers house and knocked on the door and while the robber was putting the money away. Steve and Jonathan held up a picture of his nice friend. Than the robber went to the door and saw the picture through the peephole. He thought that was his best friend then he put his gun in his pocket then he opened the door
then he got busted. When he got busted he was ashamed of himself.

this is what i done with my partner Nina

Wednesday 22 August 2018

Narrative Writing

Steve and Jonathan are detectives and Dave is the robber. The two detectives ran to the robbers house and knocked on the door and while the robber was putting the money away. Steve and Jonathan held up a picture of his nice friend than the robber went to the door and saw the picture through the peephole. He thought that was his best friend then he put his gun in his pocket then he opened the door then he got busted. When he got busted he was a shame on himself the END.

Narrative writing plan

Tuesday 21 August 2018

Friday 17 August 2018

movie narrative

One day victor the villain was sitting at home scratching his head. He didn't know what to do so he said in his mind he should rob the bank. 

The next day he put on a mask when he got to the bank then he blew up the bank and stole the safe then he ran to a field.
He was shooting back at the jerry and me and mel then he went to the beach and buried the safe.
Then Jerry shot his leg. He fell and crawled. Then he died and then he became a zombie then the virus was spreading around the world then it was just me and jerry and mel we grabbed some weapons.


We saw the zombies running to me and jerry and mel we started to shoot and there were lots of them on the feld we ran to a random house we saw a sniper on the floor and i told mel to get the sniper then he grabbed it and started to shoot out the window while he was shooting out the window me and Mel were shooting at them when they were coming through the door then more came and we jumped out of the window when all of the zombies went in the house we were running then we saw more people they were my friends there name is Antzel and Kahurangi and Joseph we all ran to the safe zone.


We were looting the houses and we saw people dead and then we saw more zombies then we shoot them we ran away and we saw a big massive zombie we saw a rpg then we shoot the big massive Zombie.


Then it died from the rpg then i went to the helicopter then we dropped a nuke it blow up half of the earth then it was all over THE END.

osa Narrative writing plan

Thursday 16 August 2018