Recount

Yesterday my family went to the beach and first we played games. We played hide and go seek. I was in with Sifa and my little brother and the others and I got cut by a branch. Then we ate pork and some other stuff. After that, we went to go and swim. Finally, we got changed and we went home.

Recount

Yesterday, my little brother and I were playing and then we went to our room. I played with my big brother and I had fun. We played a game that we made up. It was called Over and Under. Someone had to go on top and grab a pillow. The other person had to go under and try to grab the person.
I felt shocked cause my brother scared me. It was so much fun playing it with my brothers.

Peer Editing - Peephole Narrative writing

Once there were to detectives there name were Steve and Jonathan and Dave is the robber. The two detectives ran to the robbers house and knocked on the door and while the robber was putting the money away. Steve and Jonathan held up a picture of his nice friend. Than the robber went to the door and saw the picture through the peephole. He thought that was his best friend then he put his gun in his pocket then he opened the door
then he got busted. When he got busted he was ashamed of himself.

this is what i done with my partner Nina

Narrative writing plan

movie narrative

One day victor the villain was sitting at home scratching his head. He didn't know what to do so he said in his mind he should rob the bank. 

The next day he put on a mask when he got to the bank then he blew up the bank and stole the safe then he ran to a field.
He was shooting back at the jerry and me and mel then he went to the beach and buried the safe.
Then Jerry shot his leg. He fell and crawled. Then he died and then he became a zombie then the virus was spreading around the world then it was just me and jerry and mel we grabbed some weapons.


We saw the zombies running to me and jerry and mel we started to shoot and there were lots of them on the feld we ran to a random house we saw a sniper on the floor and i told mel to get the sniper then he grabbed it and started to shoot out the window while he was shooting out the window me and Mel were shooting at them when they were coming through the door then more came and we jumped out of the window when all of the zombies went in the house we were running then we saw more people they were my friends there name is Antzel and Kahurangi and Joseph we all ran to the safe zone.


We were looting the houses and we saw people dead and then we saw more zombies then we shoot them we ran away and we saw a big massive zombie we saw a rpg then we shoot the big massive Zombie.


Then it died from the rpg then i went to the helicopter then we dropped a nuke it blow up half of the earth then it was all over THE END.

osa Narrative writing plan

Imaginative Recount: Riding on a Water Jet Pack

Last Friday I went rode on a water jet pack over the Pacific Ocean. And when I turned on the water jet pack and I went flying into the air. Then my water jet pack ran out of fuel. The water stopped then I fell into the ocean. I swam to the beach and got out of the water and went home. Then the next day I went in the water and turned on the water jet pack. It worked again. Then I went home and told my mum that it worked and I never did it again.

glider

immersion assembly term 2

Term 2 on monday I arrived in the hall. We were watching all of the team show it was so cool i like team 3 and team 4 they are the best mosley mrs west and mrs moala. .Team 5 done tug of war.Team 2 tried to move the massive boulder. They tried to push the boulder It didn't work then they used a lever then the teachers jumped on it then it Went flying in the air. Our immersion assembly is about Force And motion I want to learn How to make to a plane.  

Fia Fia Tongan Boys Group

Last Friday we had to do fia fia again  because last time we had fia fia it was raining. I used an umbrella. Fia fia was so long! I was tired when it was finished. I was in the Tongan Boys group. It was fun. I got lots of sleep for the holidays.