Malo lelei my name is Osa and welcome to my blog I am 12 years old and I’m a year 8 at Pt England School my culture is Tongan and my teacher is Ms. Tipene she was our maori teacher. Now she is a teacher in room 5 ,and I love to eat pizza it is cheesy and I like to watch anime I have two favourite animes first one is My hero academia, my favourite character's are Deku and Demon Slayer. I love the part when Zenstu is sleeping he can attack when he’s asleep you should watch the anime.
Tuesday, 17 November 2020
My story
Once upon a time there lived a boy who believed on a mountain his name was tanjiro and he is very good at sniffing like a dog but better and he is the town's most greatest helper one day he had to get coal for his family because they lived on a mountain which was cold he he went down to the village and grabbed a lot of coal then he was going back up the mountain but it was late so he went to his grandpa's house. When he made it he knock on the door then his grandpa opened the door and let him in then his grandpa told him to watch out for demons and told him that there are 10 strong demons there are 5 upper moon and 5 lower moon then his grandpa told him that there is a demon who could turn other people into demons then tanjiro fell asleep then he continued to walk up the mountain while he was walking he thought of the demons then he sniffed then he smelt blood then he sprinted to his house when he got there he saw his sister holding his brother on the floor then he smelt anther scent he has never smelt in his life then it come back to him it was a demon who did this he ran to his sister then looked in side then he started crying on his knees then he picked up his sister because her blood was still war he kept running then he fell on his legs half way down the mountain then he fell off a small cliff then he could smell a scent coming straight to him then he looked at his sister then his sister jumped up and then tackled him to the floor then in a flash a person tanjiro does not know the person grabbed tanjiroś sister then he said that tanjiros sister turned into a demon then the person said that he is a demon slayer before the demon slayer was going to kill his sister tanjiro told him to wait and to not kill her and that he will turn her back to human but the demon slayer said the you cannot turn demons into humans but tanjiro kept begging but the demon had to do his job but the only way to kill a demon is to cut its head off but the demon slayer just stabbed it in the chest then tanjiro got very mad then ran in the forest and threw some rocks while he was running when he ran behind a tree h threw his hatchet up in the air then went for attack with his hands at the back of him then the demon slayer said That is a foolish move then knocked him out then he forgot that Tanjiro had a hatchet then he looked up and saw the hatchet coming right at him then he dogged it just in time. TO BE CONTINUED
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Hi Osa
ReplyDeletegreat story about a demon slayer i like the lore behind the demon however I think you should paragraph each idea so it's not so cramped. Overall it was still a good story
Hi Osa, Your story about the demon slayer is great but I think you should do paragraphs like what Zechariah had said but you should also think about putting full stops and capital letters for Tangiro.
ReplyDeleteYour sister Fita