My story

Once upon a time there lived a boy who believed on a mountain his name was tanjiro and he is very good at sniffing like a dog but better and he is the town's most greatest helper one day he had to get coal for his family because they lived on a mountain which was cold he he went down to the village and grabbed a lot of coal then he was going back up the mountain but it was late so he went to his grandpa's house. When he made it he knock on the door then his grandpa opened the door and let him in then his grandpa told him to watch out for demons and told him that there are 10 strong demons there are 5 upper moon and 5 lower moon then his grandpa told him that there is a demon who could turn other people into demons then tanjiro fell asleep then he continued to walk up the mountain while he was walking he thought of the demons then he sniffed then he smelt blood then he sprinted to his house when he got there he saw his sister holding his brother on the floor then he smelt anther scent he has never smelt in his life then it come back to him it was a demon who did this he ran to his sister then looked in side then he started crying on his knees then he picked up his sister because her blood was still war he kept running then he fell on his legs half way down the mountain then he fell off a small cliff then he could smell a scent coming straight to him then he looked at his sister then his sister jumped up and then tackled him to the floor then in a flash a person tanjiro does not know the person grabbed tanjiroś sister then he said that tanjiros sister turned into a demon then the person said that he is a demon slayer before the demon slayer was going to kill his sister tanjiro told him to wait and to not kill her and that he will turn her back to human but the demon slayer said the you cannot turn demons into humans but tanjiro kept begging but the demon had to do his job but the only way to kill a demon is to cut its head off but the demon slayer just stabbed it in the chest then tanjiro got very mad then ran in the forest and threw some rocks while he was running when he ran behind a tree h threw his hatchet up in the air then went for attack with his hands at the back of him then the demon slayer said That is a foolish move then knocked him out then he forgot that Tanjiro had a hatchet then he looked up and saw the hatchet coming right at him then he dogged it just in time. TO BE CONTINUED

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How to be a good Son\Daughter

How to be a Good Son/Daughter

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Title - What you will be explaining

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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

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How to be a Good Son/Daughter

Introduction

Are you a good son or daughter? Some kids aren’t sure. In order to be a good son or daughter you need to be sure to listen, help out and be thankful. 

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1st idea

Listen. 

One thing parents hate is when their kid doesn’t listen to them, and that doesn’t just mean hearing. Listening is when you look at your parents when they talk and actually process what they’re saying. Then once you’ve processed what they’ve said, actually go and do it.

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2nd idea

Help Out 

Parents love it when they’re kids are helpful around the house. Especially when you do it without being asked. Try little things, like washing the dishes or even just bringing in the groceries and it’ll make things a lot easier for your parents. Helping around truly has its advantages.

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3rd idea

Be Thankful 

Your parents do a lot for you. They feed you, clothe you, put a roof over your heads. That’s just a tiny portion of how much love your parents put into you. So say thank you and show it through your actions. Maybe even give your parents a massage when they come home from work, or give them breakfast in bed in the morning. Your parents want to feel loved and appreciated too.

Conclusion

So now that you’ve read my story about “Role Models” are you strong, powerful and motivational enough to be a good role model? Everyone has the strength to be a role model. So use your strength and become a better role model then you already are!

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