My Narrative Writing

Long time ago there lived an ancient mine full of dragons. The dragons could not escape the mine until there lived an evil man and his name was Moui. He likes to make little kids unhappy by taking their toy. One sunny day moui decided that he would let the dragons out and mind control them but there were only four they were the masters of all dragons. There was fire, water, air, and earth. When they got out of the cave he made this machine that can put mind control devices on anything. As soon as the devices were put on the four dragons the stop in mid air a fell at the same time the were getting elircfeid by the device electrified before the even hit the floor moui told them to fly and they did as soon as we saw the dragons flying around we hid in side. Me and Ozzy were best friends and we hate moui Me and Ozzy went inside we did not know what was happening until we saw moui on one of the dragons then we put together a plan that will defeat him but first we had to get more intel so me and Ozzy went out we were sneaking around to see what had happen until Ozzy spotted a moui pressing a button on this device and then the dragons sat down so we knew what to do so me and Ozzy followed him to where he lives there were heaps of security so we could not sneak in but there were guards so we had to make a trap then we pretended we needed help then he fell in then we snuck into mouis underwater cave after we got in we went into his office and grabbed all the intel we needed we ran like nothing just happened when we got home we put the intel on the table we opened it moui wanted to take every dragon in the world so we went out side. I told Ozzy to look if he can spot anything on the dragon he found a mind control device so I told Ozzy he goes for two and I go for two so we tried to rip it off and we did but the dragons weren’t feeling good so they fell on the floor that was part of the plan so moui can hear them and me and Ozzy hide behind the wall. Moui walked out then me and Ozzy close lined him and we won.